What do you think of the 3rd chapter of her story?

Its okay, but there to much talking. ur frined needs to do more descobring.(SP) in the story. right now i have no idea where they are, what tehre do, if there eating, or dirnking something, if there at a cafe or something. it helps if u say where they are and what they are doing at all times.. it helps teh reader from getting lost in just the talking.. other wise poeple well get turned off.. sorry